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TrissMarigold

Joined: 12 Mar 2004
Reviews: 27
Location: the land of dreams
Sat Apr 23, 2005 3:17 pm
Wow, it's so beautiful that I've cried, honestly. Shocked smiley face Crying or Very sad smiley face The understanding of their friendship and of true beauty, beautifully handled. You have a great talent with words. It's a masterpiece. Work In Progress smiley face

Triss
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Sep 10, 2005 6:43 am
Lovely. Your interpretation of their journey into the Glittering Caves, really highlights the bond between Gimli and Legolas...between Elves and Dwarves. Wonderfully done!

Michelle...
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Jan 31, 2006 6:54 am
I realized after I started reading this that I have read it before. It is still just as beautiful as the first time. I did note, however, that you do have a few tense issues. Also, in the line :

So I examine the thought and pass it aside with the same sense of amusement I always do.

in the second or third paragraph, I personally think that pass is not the best choice here. I believe that "set" would work better.

Otherwise, still wonderful and worth the re-reading. Contrats on the story of the day. Thank you for sharing.
 
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snowdrop
Joined: 29 Oct 2004
Reviews: 32
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Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:40 am
This is really beautiful; well done indeed
 
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