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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Mon Dec 06, 2004 1:31 pm
Nice. I don't tend to read a lot of poetry online, just a personal preference, but I liked this. You captured the sadness in Gollum's obsession nicely without it being overly morose, and added sinister elements here and there that gave the poem a shivery quality that was very much in character. Very Happy smiley face
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Fri Jan 07, 2005 12:27 am
I am not too fond of nontraditional verse when dealing with Tolkien; his work cries for the structure of rhyme-scheme poetry. I will make an exception in this case, however: this poem has managed to capture the essence of Gollum without resorting to the hysterical. It's very well done.
 
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ArtanisOrangeBlossom
Joined: 07 Nov 2004
Reviews: 96
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Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:35 pm
*huggles* Oh your poetry rips me heart out! ....poor Gollum...*pets him*
 
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