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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:09 am
I'm crying....oh damn....you made me cry! How wonderful!
 
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:16 am
It is so sad, but a powerful message to learn. I have never seen Erestor posed with a wife and family. It's an interesting change. I like it!
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Wed Dec 08, 2004 1:26 pm
Wow. That one was rough. Should not have read that at work. I never thought of Erestor with a wife or children. I really want to know what happened to them now. Include them in some future work, please. And not one where they die in the Last Alliance! This was very powerfully written. Great job.
 
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004
Reviews: 121
Location: England
Wed Dec 08, 2004 1:39 pm
ohhh I shall be folliowing this one closely I think .

MoB
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Fri Dec 10, 2004 3:35 pm
Fantastic job Sw. I wondered sometimes about erestor, if he had a lover.... but I never thought of him as a dad.

I must concur with ellisk. If you could someday show us what happened to those little elves, we'd love it.

A very powerful piece, simple and touching. bravissimo.
 
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Sat Dec 11, 2004 12:45 pm
Absolutely magnificent. I'd never really thought abut Erestor and what his life may have been like before he came to Imladris, though I never thought it could be something so sad as this. Your story was very powerful and moving. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Very Happy smiley face
 
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
Tue Dec 14, 2004 2:49 pm
I'm back to review this after reading the 'Review' thread on the forum. PLEASE continue with this story. I think its a great beginning to story on a character who we don't know deeply in depth. I too never thought of Erestor in having had a wife/family. Enjoyed chapter 1 muchly, and looking forward to the next one(of several I hope!.)
Cheers Smile smiley face
 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:22 pm
Very emotional. Loved it. I hope you write more about these OC's that you created. You made me love them in one story.
 
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Hellion

Joined: 22 Nov 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: Connecticut
Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:18 pm
You made me gasp for air.
You made me cry.
You made me think.
Pure Perfection.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Feb 24, 2005 1:02 pm
This was very beautiful. Heartbreaking and haunting, and truly beautiful. Thank you.
 
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