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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed Dec 15, 2004 11:00 am
This story is a long, soft moment, threaded with expectation. I found it kind of creepy that a father and daughter would be chatting about death on the eve of her wedding, but it all tied together so nicely at the end. Lovely and lilting. Thank you for letting me read.
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Wed Dec 15, 2004 5:44 pm
Very well written with some extremely nice passages. You've worked your sources together very well and have created a nice piece here. I agree with Viv that it's a bit chilling to think of death just before your wedding, but as she says, it all fits in. The story actually gave me a lot to think on. Very Happy smiley face
 
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