Reviews for "Ancient Languages"

Tue Dec 21, 2004 11:45 am

Nice beginning, and I'm interested to see how your OFC will fit into Middle Earth. You've certainly done a good job of setting up her background in this first segment and the writing is very clear and flows well. As an 'ancient languages' freak myself, I'll be watching this one with interest Very Happy smiley face

Wed Dec 22, 2004 5:32 pm

Please update! I'd love to see more of this story develop.

Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:14 pm

Oh what fun! The beginning was "very correct" in the life of a nerd...it felt most like my daily routine Wink smiley face

The character is begining to take shape and the writing flows well. The second chapter deals with the fustrations of language nicely. I look forward to more.

Wed Jan 05, 2005 5:32 am

Great start! I like the fact that you have made it as cannon as possible..the OC not being able to communicate in either westron, elvish or any other language of Middle-earth. Update soon!!

Wed May 18, 2005 5:36 pm

I've just come across this - you've laid a very convincing foundation. So please build on it soon!

Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:32 pm

I am enjoying what you have so far, as it's very convincing, and somehow fitting that it would be an ancient languages professor to be pulled back into ME. I'm going to be really looking forward to the next chapter. This is really a great story!

Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:06 pm

This is very good. A nice take on the "falling into Middle-Earth" premise. You've done an excellent job of explaining about Lyla's past and Lyla as person before hurling her into Rivendell. And Lyla is a great character. I like you incorporated the language barrier and Lyla's frustration at not knowing where she is and not being able to communicate. I'll be watching for your next update.

Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:21 am

mmmmm this is very intresing, id like to see where this goes, please update soon!! Smile smiley face

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