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Hathor

Joined: 10 Jun 2003
Reviews: 52
Location: Lancashire, England
Sun Aug 03, 2003 1:23 pm
Laughing smiley face I guessed the twist near the middle, but it was still amausing to read. And a good little Eomer story to boot. Lovely!
 
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LeRouret

Joined: 06 Oct 2003
Reviews: 12
Location: Georgia (unfortunately)
Tue Oct 07, 2003 2:23 pm
Ah, got me that time! Loved it, loved the twist at the end. Wonderful choice of wording!
 
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greenlingers1
Joined: 21 Mar 2004
Reviews: 15
Location: california
Mon Jun 07, 2004 3:00 am
what a good little story you had me going i thought it was a human pov ........but i was sadly mistaken..........beautifully written for an animal.........i could see the proudness through its eyes.........

very well written....... Wink smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:32 pm
Okay, you gave away too much in the summary. Had it figured out by the second paragraph. But it was still a very good piece. I am not sure an animal would really have felt quite those emotions, but it did add to the build-up. Definately deserves a toast and a bucket of popcorn.
 
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Saralitazie
Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Stamping Property of Litzy the Lush all over Glorfindel.
Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:19 pm
Hilarious! I had no idea until the last bit, when he says stuff about foaling and such. Here I was thinking you didn't know Eomer married Lothiriel and were going to hitch him to someone else... ROFL smiley face

Excellent style.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Mon Feb 14, 2005 4:53 pm
Very well writtenSmile smiley face A very nice twist at the end but so much love and respect, and good humor, just the right combination for the inhabitants of Rohan, of all sorts!Smile smiley face
 
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Galadriel8891

Joined: 06 Dec 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: Somewhere out there...
Mon Feb 14, 2005 8:10 pm
Yes, the twist got me too...I read it again and saw all the hints you had dropped along the way, but since I wasn't really looking for one along the way...Well, all in all it made perfect sense. Nicely written!
 
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TrissMarigold

Joined: 12 Mar 2004
Reviews: 27
Location: the land of dreams
Sat Apr 23, 2005 3:35 pm
Laughing smiley face Nice twist at the end. You got me there Very Happy smiley face And there I was thinking Eomer would be having an affair before marriage or something... Laughing smiley face
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Sat May 21, 2005 12:42 am
I totally missed the twist! And we just had a foal here, too. Great fun! Smile smiley face
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sat May 21, 2005 9:13 am
Beautiful! Sweet to tell the story from the horse's point of view. Very Happy smiley face
 
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