Reviews for "Desk Job"

Wed Dec 22, 2004 3:36 pm

Jono the hobbit confectioner is a very intriguing character, even though he is only mentioned in passing. A Took, perhaps? He seems awfully adventurous for a hobbit, or were hobbits more adventury way-back-when? Still, I can imagine a hobbit liking his sweets! I'm assuming that the point-of-view character is Elrond, since he makes an observation about his sons, but it couldn't hurt to mention his name earlier in the piece. Now, about that smut.... *yum*. I'll never look at Elrond the same way again! And Celebrian, what a little tart! May I bribe you for more of these little gems?

Thu Dec 23, 2004 12:50 am

I agree. Elrond. Say it. Elrond. It took me SEVERAL paragraphs - well, up until you mentioned his sons, the twins,.. before I knew who it was. It was a NICE guessing game up to that point!!!!

You know, I love to see Elrond and Celebrian having an enjoyable time! It was finger-lickin' good!

Very Happy smiley face

Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:43 am

What a great bit of mischief! The (non-sexual, even) details were great; and so much up-the-sleeve humor! great.

Sun May 29, 2005 1:20 am

Oh that was really cute!!! Hawt yes, but cute too.... hee hee!!!!

Sun May 29, 2005 2:00 pm

I have read this one before...and apparently forgot to comment! I am naughty!

And so is Celebrian... Wink smiley face

I liked the guessing game...is it Erestor or Elrond I was thinking...and then it was elrond...which was very nice too... Wink smiley face

Loved it... Very Happy smiley face

Bird

Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:45 am

Lol! Highly amusing...poor Erestor, caught in the middle...

Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:37 pm

Oh, so that's where Arwen came from. Very Happy smiley face

That reminds me: my boyfriend has a paper due Friday... Thanks for a good (steamy!) laugh.

Thu Jun 27, 2013 3:21 am

This was just brilliant xD Naughty, naughty Celebrian!

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