Reviews for "Parallels"
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Dec 22, 2004 3:16 pm
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Weee! I'm an avid SG-1 watcher, though I've never felt confident enough to write SG-1 fic, so it's a thrill to read a cross of the two fandoms. The interplay between Daniel and Jack was amusingly in-character. Poor Jack: it takes him a while to get the more technical concepts, doesn't it? (Though I think he feigns ignorance sometimes.) I'll confess I'm not a big fan of adverbs, but this opening bit hooked me instantly: "Daniel Jackson sneezed explosively". It instantly sets the tone for the rest of the piece (so far). And thank you for explaining why it was so easy to remove the arrow. That gave a bit of extra realism to the scene. Granted I don't know much abotu first-aid, but would Maj. Carter have slapped some antiseptic like alcohol on that wound before she wrapped it up? I'm putting this story on my watch list and looking forward to updates! Thanks for posting it here.  |
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Istalindir
Joined: 28 Nov 2003
Reviews: 4
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Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:06 pm
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I also love SG-1 and am happy to see the world of LOTR meshed with my favorite gate traveling heros. I've enjoyed the chapters so far and yes, Jack and Daniel are definitely in character. I'll be putting this on my watch list also. Look forward to the next update  |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:38 pm
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| Just found and read this. I hope you are continuing this highly entertaining story. Jack and the elves are just too funny. Even Daniel's attempts to question them and learn about the so-called Goauld that might be there are funny. |
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Eruwesteth
Joined: 22 Aug 2006
Reviews: 16
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Thu Aug 31, 2006 11:00 pm
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hahaha. A long night. And for boh parties. This is a great story, extremely life-like. I watch it play out in my head. It is great! so was it Tolkien who went to ME? and how is it that none of them have ever read or seen the movies? Anyway... Great chapters look forward to more
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Isadora22
Joined: 07 Aug 2006
Reviews: 45
Location: Angband,
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:14 am
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| I have myself followed stargate series for a while. It's good to see that all characters' usual psychological traits are there. Very well done. I really like the story. I'm waiting with impatience for chapter 4 and other ones to be adding to the story. |
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Cath
Joined: 04 Sep 2006
Reviews: 1
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:32 am
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*snerk* Funny. And it has definite potential. Carry on.
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