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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
Fri Dec 24, 2004 12:40 pm
Laughing smiley face What a great twist on a classic! And did I understand correctly that Father Yule is an Elf? How funny! This was nice to read on Christmas Eve. We don't have any kids in our family anymore (I was the last), so we don't tell any of the good Christmas stories anymore. We just watch "Christmas Vacation" Razz smiley face
 
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:15 pm
That was adorable and extremely clever! I loved it! When you mentioned Santa as an elf, I imagined Legolas wearing a santa outfit - it caused quite a bit of giggling on my part. X3
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:32 pm
He he... that was so funny... and so sweet! Thank you! - I don't know if you're basing this on an original poem (at least not one I'm familiar with), but I still loooooved it! Very Happy smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Dec 26, 2004 3:58 pm
A nice sweet for Christmas; a confection that lingers. I found it a little long, however; maybe I was comparing it unfairly as I read to "T'was The Night Before Christmas" which runs along at a fair clip. The different-length verses also threw me a bit.

I wonder you didn't put it in Bombadil's corner, though; no reason a story can't be told in verse.
 

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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Sun Dec 26, 2004 4:08 pm
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