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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Wed Dec 29, 2004 1:11 pm

Wow! Just, simply WOW! I, too, was extremely disappointed in PJ’s treatment (or lack thereof) of F/E. The EE DVD did help ease things a bit, but I like your version SO MUCH BETTER! Your insight into these characters is spot on. In a word this was amazing. No, beautiful. No, perfect. No, wait, amazingly beautiful perfection. (Okay, so once again we are reminded why Freya is limited to reviews…) Rolling Eyes smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sat Jan 22, 2005 2:50 pm

I liked this, particulalry for a first (but, hopefully, not last) effort. I also have always thought this romance given too short shrift in both film and book; your strong emotional palatte gives it a depth I've missed. I found some tense confusion, however, and think, perhaps, your transitions created some reduncancies. I wonder if you couldn't have said more with fewer words.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Sun May 22, 2005 5:21 pm

Saw this as the story of the day and had to check it out. I like it a lot. It's a very nice view on what their courtship might have been like, as well as a view on what their recoveries might have been. I like the union you've portrayed, as well as the sense that it would grow deeper as the relationship progressed.
 
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