Reviews for "Team Work"

Mon Jan 03, 2005 11:34 am

Good old fashioned lusty elves, well done and I liked the conversation at the end. nice to see Erestor finally getting some attention.

Inglor

Mon Jan 03, 2005 1:29 pm

Funny, dynamic and enjoyable. It's nice to see Glorfindel and Erestor not so "in control" of themselves for once Laughing smiley face

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One piece of advice ... you might want to reformat the layout. Not having breaks between paragraphs made the fiction a bit hard to follow.

Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:23 pm

great

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