Reviews for "Passing"

Sun Jan 02, 2005 11:19 am

The story of Aragorn and Arwen is by far my favorite story Tolkien ever wrote. I think you captured the bittersweetness that must have been their life and the ultimate tragedy of death very well. I noticed a few awkward phrases, but nothing major enough to draw me out of the story. I personally sympathize more with Arwen, and I'm looking forward to reading this parting from her POV.

Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:33 pm

So beautiful! I cried. And cried. So lovely, yet so sad. But, she lived for less than a year before joining him. So it all turns out all right in the end, although the part about his passing is so sad. But you are such a wonderful author. Have you ever written A/A stories that are not so sad? I think you should! You're writing it excellent. I am still crying! What a baby I am! But then, I have never cried from just reading, so it must be that your work is so good. Crying or Very sad smiley face

Poor Aragorn, but even more poor Arwen. Although, as I already said, it DOES turn out alright in the end, so it's not so sad, right?

Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:33 pm

So beautiful! I cried. And cried. So lovely, yet so sad. But, she lived for less than a year before joining him. So it all turns out all right in the end, although the part about his passing is so sad. But you are such a wonderful author. Have you ever written A/A stories that are not so sad? I think you should! You're writing it excellent. I am still crying! What a baby I am! But then, I have never cried from just reading, so it must be that your work is so good. Crying or Very sad smiley face

Poor Aragorn, but even more poor Arwen. Although, as I already said, it DOES turn out alright in the end, so it's not so sad, right?

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