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rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Thu Feb 24, 2005 8:08 pm
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| A great story with lots of emotion, drama and angst - hope we see Legolas get his revenge |
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ArtanisOrangeBlossom
Joined: 07 Nov 2004
Reviews: 96
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Fri Mar 04, 2005 8:25 pm
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| drama, angst, Lego, Van...and horror. what more could i ask for? *grins* love it. And Orophin..*sniffles* he tears at my heart! omg...*pets Orophin* he gets the girl in mine! LOL great job though seriously (even though you're gonna have a coniption fit when you find out i've read this. *grins*) |
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Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Mon Mar 07, 2005 8:32 pm
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al....that was just....grrr, *I* want to rip the f*cking larin apart now!!! 
please update soon, dahling! you are the best!  |
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Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:23 pm
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larin got all he deserved. put into the same position, i'm not sure i would have enough mercy that your legolas had and kill him straight off. if it had been my parents, my brothers - i'm sure i would've tortured the man for much longer.
beautifully written, al!  |
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 5:36 pm
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| Okay,, your wish is my command. I review. This has been a difficult story to live through. Translation: it felt real. I am glad Van is the ever present voice of reason and influence in Legolas' life. It shows how deep the love between them is that he would be able to overcome his deep desire for torurous revenge for love of his wife. Whew! what a rollercoaster to ride! But like you said, it isn't really over until they are home and even then some wounds take a long time to heal. I am looking forward to the next chapters. |
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rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:34 pm
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glad to see legolas got his revenge - I always said he was all man!
love the way you handle legolas's turmoil and anger - your writing style is superb, please write more chapters  |
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Sun Mar 13, 2005 6:53 am
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Ahhhh, I feel much better. That was worth the wait
Loved the Nasty descriptions of Larin's injuries. I could clearly picture the action, something that I have found hard to do and few people can do as well as you did.
You handled the pull back so well, I don't feel the anger any more. The way you pulled Legolas back from the brink and described his potential fall were genius
 for the move. |
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Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Sat Mar 19, 2005 4:59 pm
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| *sniff*.....i think i did almost as much crying as vanalosse did this chpater! |
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Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:11 pm
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al........do i sense a sequal?!?
damn, i hope so - cuz i can't get enough of this one! |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Sat Mar 19, 2005 11:24 pm
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All right, just finished, and now am all sniffly. How utterly sweet! And how bizarre that I am saying that about *this* story! What a wild ride of emotions from beginning to end. But you saved them the only way I think it could have been done: by reminding them how much they needed each other and how much the kids needed them both. The moment in the second-to-last chapter when Vanelosse recognizes that her family were what saved her spiritually ... well, that was the crux of it as far as I was concerned. Congrats on finishing, Al.  |
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