Reviews for "Here You Cannot Leave Me"

Fri Jan 07, 2005 10:10 am

Hi, Alassante

Lovely poem - I did not know that you had it in you! Only complaint: Aragorn's name as king is spelt Elessar - and not Ellesar.

Love, Frigg

Fri Jan 07, 2005 11:28 am

Frigg said
> Hi, Alassante
>
> Lovely poem - I did not know that you had it in you! Only complaint: Aragorn's name as king is spelt Elessar - and not Ellesar.
>
> Love, Frigg

Oops - I will fix that! Surprised smiley face

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Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:27 pm

Nice poem. The metre's consistant and nicely flowing, and the rhymes don't sound forced, (those being my two usual complaints concerning poetry Twisted Evil smiley face

). As for subject, I reckon you've nicely captured the feelings involved, and I'd look forward to seeing more of the same stuff from you (hint). Reckon you've got a talent for poetry Very Happy smiley face

Tue Feb 01, 2005 7:24 am

Short and sweet ^_^

Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:14 pm

This is so lovely, Al! I had no idea it was here, but now I've stumbled upon it, I feel like I've found some sort of hidden treasure. lol. The singsong cadence was just gut-wrenching, considering the subject matter. Made me think of elves singing at funerals.

Mon Oct 10, 2005 7:32 am

Short and poignant. I love the cadence of this poem, every word carries so much grief and pain. It is almost like your Arwen cannot speak no more because the grief chokes her, why should you use more? Knowing and watching your loved one die is so had to catch in words: you succeeded in that! I would love to see more poetry coming from you.

Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:22 am

How simply wonderful this is! At lines 7 & 8 I swear I felt tears! Very well done.

Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:20 am

I'm not usually a big fan of fandom poetry. But this was beautifully written, lots of heartfelt emotions. I can actualy visualize the scene. Very very good work! I love this!

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