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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:37 am

I was trying to think of something really clever to say and all I could think of was 'awww' Laughing smiley face Such an engaging story. Reading this you could feel Pippin's excitement and then the ending was just such a contrast. Really nice work Very Happy smiley face
 
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SecretKeeper

Joined: 13 Dec 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Cardinal Rule 1: Never state your location.
Sat Jan 08, 2005 7:14 pm

I agree with SpaceWeavil...Aww! I feel bad for Pippin, poor rascal. He's this energetic ball of energy that wants approval from his da but doesn't get it. You want to huggle him and say it will be alright and that his dad is just a priggy hobbit. This is great!
 
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