Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:39 pm
Nice little scene, and glad to see Galadriel made Gimli feel welcome. I was starting to feel very sorry for him There are a few technical errors throughout the story, but I shall send a note by PM rather than going on about it here, as that would probably be more helpful. But you seem to be a very prolific writer from the number of stories you have here on OSA already, so well done, and definitely this one is an enjoyable read, and describes a scene I had wondered about.
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sat Jan 15, 2005 11:08 am
Very sweet; it nearly made me cry but only after I stopped laughing from your opening paragraph.
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