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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:28 pm
I will admit it took two readings of this before I clicked who the protagonist was in the first section, but it was an enjoyable feeling when I finally did work it out. I misread the final paragraph to start with and thought you had been talking about Legolas, but now I see that it's much cleverer than that. So I found the ending a very unexpected and enjoyable twist. Well done on that.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:10 pm
NIftySmile smiley face An interesting twist, since we always see what we think we see, until clarity hits (trying not to spoil the surpriseSmile smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sat Jan 15, 2005 11:01 am
Well done; always nice to see another point of view.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:11 am
I do love the twist, and how you kept all hint of the archer's identity secret until the last paragraph. I honestly had no idea! The at last it made perfect sense. Excellent story!
 
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