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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:17 pm
Very nice. I don't usually read much blank verse, but this has a wonderfully lyrical quality, and the interesting structure, interspersing your lines of 'dialogue' throughout made it very interesting to read. Kudos Very Happy smiley face
 
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linturai
Joined: 17 Jan 2005
Reviews: 7
Location: um, nowhere, really, just ohio, u know nothing special. yep.
Tue Jan 18, 2005 8:47 pm
this was good. i liked it a lot. it was a little bit different, with the whole random 'dialouge deal, but is nice. Laughing smiley face Wink smiley face
 
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Monarchsnake

Joined: 18 Feb 2005
Reviews: 6
Location: Delia House, Lothlorien
Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:14 am
Why do folks find it strange to write dialogue into a poem? lol

Glad to see another person who does it as well.

I really like your poetry style, and the poem itself almost made me cry.

The Vision you gave and the voice I heard from that vision, allowed me to imagine the earth actually crying out for the elves to come back and make everything how it once was, again.

"Can You Hear...?"

Yes, Yes. Surely I can.
 
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Regnet

Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Reviews: 23
Location: flying over Needmore, PA
Fri Apr 29, 2005 6:50 pm
This was beyond excellent. The title was well chosen. Very good job.
 
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