Reviews for "Burning Heart"

Fri Jan 14, 2005 8:55 pm

You are off to an intriguing start--one cannot help but wonder what brought the elf woman to Lothlorien without her husband and fading in childbirth. There is potential there for some very angsty twists. Good job.

One little suggestion and a question: Look out for picky little things like the possessive 's. There are couple places where you forgot the apostrophe. A beta could probably help you catch things like that and they are friendly on this site. Smile smiley face

Now the question--I wonder if this baby will be the Narya you refered to in your summary and if so, is there any connection between her and Gandalf's Ring of Power by the same name. Hmmm.

Look forward to reading more.

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Reviews for "Burning Heart"