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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sat Jan 22, 2005 11:38 am
This was a nice moment between Legolas and Gimli, and a nice insight into their friendship. I liked the way you got across how far they'd come since the Council. That was very subtle and effective.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sat Jan 22, 2005 4:21 pm
Legolas's voice is very strong in this piece. I liked your decision to write in first-person from his point of view. Your turns of phrase, I thought, were particularly elven and poetic, even in prose. And the characterization of Gimli as gruff but loyal, trudging after his friend even though he himself might have preferred to settle, was endearing. Even beta-less, the grammar errors were few. A beta could only add a little polish; the piece is good already. Smile smiley face
 
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AnaLee

Joined: 07 Mar 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Imladris
Tue Mar 08, 2005 9:31 pm
Wonderful piece! As I have said before the works I truly enjoy are the ones where you are taken into the characters thoughts and you have done that here. I look forward to reading more of your work.
 
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