Reviews for "Life after the Battle"

Thu Jul 31, 2003 8:31 am

Very interesting. I like the title, I like the original characters, I like the concept. I might have thought Aragorn a little more hardened, though. Just a few annoying mispellings that need to be corrected.

Thu Jul 31, 2003 7:00 pm

This is an interesting premise, and I'm looking forward to your developing it. One suggestion (and it's a big one): please invite someone you trust to beta this piece. Sometimes we writers read our own work so many times that we miss simple grammar and spelling errors. Everybody does it. But a beta can really help. Other than that... Nice. I like how you've implied that this is Aragorn's first encounter with mass carnage. And Tolkien does say elsewhere that Aragorn travelled extensively in the south, even fought with the Gondorians in his earlier years. Was that what you were thinking? I'm not sure you even need to continue... his shock and horror are sufficient insight into his character. Well envisioned!

Sun May 30, 2004 10:05 am

Very interesting. Original.. and bloody! Great descriptions!.. I only wish it wasn't so short! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Dec 16, 2004 8:16 pm

Interesting story, but there are a few mistakes. There is a very good forum here to get a beta and I'm sure someone would be willing to help you sort these out. But there is one very obvious mistake in the first line, and this might put people off. With those things sorted, you could have a cracking story on your hands though Very Happy smiley face

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