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Elijahcat
Joined: 20 Feb 2004
Reviews: 1
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 12:19 pm

I like how you provided more depth to Eomer's character. There is very little written of him in such a way. It certainly could be the reason why Eomer is so serious looking (in the movies). I hope to read how you will write about him meeting Lothiriel soon. Please keep writing.
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Feb 10, 2005 12:01 am

I think you and I keep trading reviews!! But we share a love of Eomer so its okay.

One problem with your story. You left the hero all sad and broken hearted! You are not supposed to do that to Eomer! shame shame No No smiley face

Seriously, it was a really good story and I liked the aspect of a previous love in his teen years. I had thought of doing something similiar at one point so I was glad someone had followed through on it. It's funny to think of Eowyn that young though, isn't it? Laughing smiley face
 
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Frigg
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 63
Location: Taastrup, Denmark
Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:42 am

Alassante said
> I think you and I keep trading reviews!! But we share a love of Eomer so its okay.
>
> One problem with your story. You left the hero all sad and broken hearted! You are not supposed to do that to Eomer! shame shame No No smiley face
>
> Seriously, it was a really good story and I liked the aspect of a previous love in his teen years. I had thought of doing something similiar at one point so I was glad someone had followed through on it. It's funny to think of Eowyn that young though, isn't it? Laughing smiley face

Don't worry, my dear ---- I have a sequel to this coming up (I just want to get it right ...) - he will be happy again, I promise! As if I would leave our darling horselord sad forever .... Alassante, please!!
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Mon Feb 14, 2005 3:50 pm

A really good story, especially so because it had Eomer in it! Smile smiley face
 
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:46 pm

Poor Eomer. Good job we know he eventually finds someone else. LBJ
 
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