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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Wed Jan 26, 2005 4:13 pm
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I hardly know what to say! To a story so rich in lyricism and baubled with description where words themselves become the road to, the tool of, and the reliquary of power - amazing!
You have not only revived Tolkien's characters here you have perfectly created the roads by which the travelled into those pages. I am in awe of your vision of Grima - you lay the seeds of all the strengths and weaknesses of character by which he is more commonly known, and with compassion and equinimity.
Lackwit - your name fits you ill. |
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Haleth

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
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Sat Jan 29, 2005 8:39 pm
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A wonderfully sympathetic view of Grima and how he chose his own downfall.
The explanation of how he became one of Theoden's advisors is well thought out.
The use of language in this story is simply lovely.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Tue Feb 01, 2005 7:29 am
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A well thought of plot... made me shudder a bit. Women is the cause of men's downfall... hehe... *ducks all feminists worldwide*
Seriously, your flow of language is poetic and lyrical....(can that be in the same sentece?)
Ditto, loved it...in a disturbed kinda way. |
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 31
Location: England
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Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:44 am
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This is so good. So intense. I love the name that Eowyn gives to Grima....and then we know what is he called latterly do we not?
Eokat. |
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:52 am
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I can't really add much to what others have said above, but I'll add my 'well done' to theirs.  |
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:26 am
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| Very good! |
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:36 pm
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| This is an excellent short story, very well built and richly detailed. The characters are all portrayed very well in a tight space- Eowyn's passion, Eomer's temper, Theoden's wisdom- with just a few words doing so much. A great choice for story of the day. Thank you for it. |
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Cuthalion

Joined: 10 Jul 2004 Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 6:22 pm
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Wonderful... rich in language and imagery, thrilling and haunting at the same time. Would you allow me to translate this into german? My site is here:
http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de/home.html |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:45 pm
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| A truly outstanding filler. You have done a wonderful job here, opening a glimpse of what he was before the turn. Quite plausible. Thank you for sharing. |
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