Reviews for "Awakening"

Thu Feb 03, 2005 7:51 am

Well done. I thought you imagined Eowyn's unconscious experience very well and interestingly. You stepped surely over unknown ground and mapped it very originally. Perhaps you should have stopped there? The other sections struck me more as filling in the blanks of what we had seen on the film; ground we've been over before. It somewhat dimmed the experience of reading the very original and imaginative section that went before.

Also, wondered why Eowyn would think her dying would justifiably punish Eomer: "would serve him right ..." for what?

But again, great beginning: original, well-conceived, and well-written.

Thu Feb 10, 2005 6:47 pm

Wow! That was really good. Well-written, too. Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:06 am

I liked your descriptions of Eowyn's feelings, and how she is going through her pain. But I was a bit confused by the bit where she thought it would serve her brother right if she died. Otherwise, it was good.

Thu May 05, 2005 11:54 am

I liked Fatamir comparing her to a lily touched by frost. And I didn't mind the gap filling. This was gentle, kind and sweetly romantic. Smile smiley face

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