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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Thu Feb 03, 2005 4:42 pm
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Ah, I love it, Marta! What an awkward situation for the new ambassador, and how like Elrond to try to set him at his ease. The activities you describe sound so appropriate for the times. And Elrond's gift for Pippin's new school is perfect!
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Hellion

Joined: 22 Nov 2004 Reviews: 28
Location: Connecticut
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Fri Feb 04, 2005 12:58 pm
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| Wonderful! I love these short stories that seems to fill the days between the major events of book. I can picture the past and future mingling in the moment. You captured it and wrote it beautifully. |
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Fri Feb 04, 2005 1:56 pm
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| A very nice and, IMO, faithful portrayal of Elrond - something I really appreciate in a story. The writing itself is very good, and the characterisation excellent. Really enjoyed it. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:42 am
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Liked it too. Looking forward to such fics.  |
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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003 Reviews: 107
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Mon Feb 07, 2005 2:03 pm
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Marta, this is wonderful. I have missed reading your work. You always manage to infuse so much into a short story. Elrond is wonderfully characterized and the comment about the Hobbits learning that there was more to the world than the Shire was an excellent insight. Your writing just gets better and better all the time.  |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Thu Feb 10, 2005 12:15 pm
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| Again, Marta, you've done a remarkable job at getting into your characters heads at wonderfully mundane and exemplary moments in their lives. While you draw Elrond out and give this known character some lovely new depths, your completely new character of Halbeleg is likewise a full and strong character. Well done. |
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Wed Feb 16, 2005 4:11 pm
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| It is little moments of everyday life that I love to read. Fics like this make ME so much more real. I felt like I was there. Thank you for the little trip. |
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mistybutterfly

Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: *tap tap tap* Hello, I\'m in your monitor. Can someone let me out?
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Thu May 05, 2005 8:28 pm
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| What a wonderful way to tie in these small but very informative events and happenings. |
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