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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon Feb 14, 2005 5:17 pm
The first line ("I see the way you look into his eyes.") seems to set up a friction, a tension in their relationship. By the end of the poem, I don't feel that tension. Am I missing an important character movement here? The word choices were strong, and that alone makes this a really good poem, I think. Poetry lends itself particularly well to tales of the Valar. Thanks for sharing this one.
 
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