Reviews for "Harmony"

Tue Feb 15, 2005 4:53 pm

First review! Yes! Twisted Evil smiley face

Aye, when you let me read this before, I will tell you the same thing. I enjoyed it because I can see what your words painted in my mind. Thank you for sharing this piece, Drew. I was glad to read it again too. Smile smiley face

- DEC

Tue Feb 15, 2005 8:29 pm

Congrats, Drew, on posting your first fic! This poem has some lovely turns of phrase: "Morning air flows through me" and "sun's how shower" in particular.

In terms of fan fic, however, I'd like to see it a little more rooted in Midde-Earth: without the summary, I wouldn't have known it was an Elf or Rivendell.

Tue Feb 15, 2005 8:37 pm

When I was younger and showed my really bad poems to a poetry professor, she read them and tried to be gentle. She told me that solid imagery was the key to making a poem come alive. You've done that here, not just with the visuals but with all the senses. It feels like home, but gloriously so. Lovely.

Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:59 pm

You are very good in your word choices to provide VISUAL imagery! This is important in poetry because we for need a vision in our mind's eye.

I felt like I was THERE...

I think you have done a very good job at that! Very Happy smiley face

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