Reviews for "Rebirth"
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Wed Mar 23, 2005 6:50 pm
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That last line really got me. Beautifully written. I'm so glad this "what if" plot bunny attacked you. Please continue. I'm really enjoying this.
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Ilmatar
Joined: 20 May 2004 Reviews: 51
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Thu Mar 24, 2005 5:27 pm
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What a great story you have written. I really liked it. I loved the way you unraveled things bit by bit and threw in some clues here and there. The way you write is just amazing: your characters are always believable and deep and you make the world around the come alive to the reader. I like "what if?" stories, especially when they are as believable as this one is. And I think that after thousands of years of loneliness, Thranduil really deserved to get her back from the Halls of Mandos.
I will be looking forward to your next piece! |
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Sat Apr 02, 2005 4:17 am
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I cannot believe its over. I saw on the description it was complete and I was upset. It's too soon. A few more chapters, please!!
Okay - now that the humilating begging is over. I made the very poor decision to read this at work while on break. Which I do most stories and has caused me more than a few strange looks in the break room. But when I am looking at printed paper that looks like it could possibly be work documents and tears are streaming down my face, I get stared at. Then I got consoled. I had to make up something really quick why I was crying cause I couldn't tell them the truth - that an elf was reliving her death??
Seriously Thu, all jokes aside, it was absolutely beautiful. I cried through most of the last chapter. I was glad she and Thranduil finally got past kissing but he was so honorable to wait. GAWD he is wonderful at being self sacrificing. But then when she relives her death, I boo hoo'd. No one can touch Thranduil now, Thu. You "own" him now. Take care of him.  |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Tue Dec 19, 2006 6:25 pm
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| Sob! thats all I can say,so good it was painful! |
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