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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun Feb 20, 2005 3:48 pm

Very good and interesting beginning! Smile smiley face I will be watching this. Wink smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:49 pm

Interesting! I thought you captured the confusion of dreams well. But, please, cut down those never-ending senences!
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun May 22, 2005 10:46 am

I really like the third chapter! Very Happy smiley face Your writing is definitely improving a lot! (it was fine before, but now it's really flowing smoothly). I can't wait to see what happens next! What's going to happen to poor Merry? Shocked smiley face
 
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