Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun Feb 20, 2005 3:48 pm
Very good and interesting beginning! I will be watching this.
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:49 pm
Interesting! I thought you captured the confusion of dreams well. But, please, cut down those never-ending senences!
Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun May 22, 2005 10:46 am
I really like the third chapter! Your writing is definitely improving a lot! (it was fine before, but now it's really flowing smoothly). I can't wait to see what happens next! What's going to happen to poor Merry?