Reviews for "A Tookish Prayer"

Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:54 am

Beautifully done, Eyborg, really.Very fine!

Cúthalion

Wed Feb 23, 2005 12:02 am

Sweet and hot! As I've come to expect from you my dear! Beer smiley face

Wed Feb 23, 2005 1:50 am

Found the link for this through Hobbit_Het and enjoyed it very much. I liked Pippin and Diamond asking 'all fair beings of Valinor' to bless them with a child and then having hot sex under the stars. Great story.
Grey_wonderer

Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:44 pm

I feel an "aww" moment coming on. A sweet little tale you've got here. I'll be watching for more. Very Happy smiley face

Thu Feb 24, 2005 2:26 pm

A very nice idea, Eyborg, well executed. Some of the more modern language passages threw me a bit, but otherwise thoroughly enjoyable.

Sun Feb 27, 2005 2:05 am

A very heartfelt and emotional story. Pippin and Diamond long for a child so that Pray for it to be answered. Very Happy smiley face

They get a son,and they ar very happy... Great story...

Sun Feb 27, 2005 10:02 pm

A nicely done tale - tender and titillating at the same time. I tend to *cough* prefer outdoor venues myself. Cool smiley face

You are improving steadily, it seems. This fic flows more smoothly than your previous ones and has far less 'extra' (you must excuse me, I am known as the 'machete beta' back home... LOL!). I am delighted to see you blossoming into a very fine writer!

Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:46 pm

Oh, how tender and lovely and ever-so Pippin-ish. That lad! My, my.... hehe You wrote the devotion between then so nicely, I could feel the love they had for one another, and the faith too. I loved this line:

“They can hear us... Can’t you feel it?” Pippin whispered.

“Yes,” Diamond said. “I can feel it”.

Wonderful! I always personally feel that Diamond and Pippin's marriage was one of the rocky and rather bad sort, but this lovely story has given me a look into what a peaceful life between them would be, and it makes me happy sometimes to see Pippin with such a dear lass who obviously cares for him tremendously (such as in this lovely story Smile smiley face

Most of the time I read fics and Diamond really has no substance to her...there was more to her in this, you wrote her well).

... there was another line, something about Diamond ' never loving any other hobbit more than her Peregrin Took' the way you wrote that made me go 'awww' hehe. And also, I liked the little glipse into Valinor! Unexpected but nice. And also I loved how at the end you squeezed in Merry and Estella, as I can never picture a story about Pippin without it including Merry somehow (and vice versa).

I also just loved the part when Pippin began praying to the Valar! Just lovely! Great job Smile smiley face

~Saoirse

Fri Nov 25, 2005 1:22 pm

I enjoyed this tale, I especially like the element of faith and hope, I feel that is a thread that runs strongly through Tolkiens works that is too often overlooked. Well-done. Smile smiley face

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