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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
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Tue May 01, 2007 11:29 am
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I loved how noble Haldir was in this chapter - it definitely fitted my version of the book!Haldir.
I must also congratulate you on your reference to the old Tales form The Silmarillion; it added that pinch of spice and flavour to the story which makes it stand out from others. I wish him and Aduial luck!
Silverian (sorry, can't spell) also adds drama now that she knows -will she or won't she tell Arwen of Aragorn's presence?
Aragorn recalling the past and being uncertain is interesting so do continue! Please don't leave it so long NiennaNir! <Jadwiga# |
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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
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Tue May 01, 2007 11:31 am
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| Ooo! Meant toa dd that the sadnees/grief that runs through this chapter is bitter yet sweet! |
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PonytailGoddess
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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Wed May 23, 2007 1:38 am
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| Haldir really does need a wife; he needs to stop clinging to the Evenstar. Poor elf. |
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PonytailGoddess
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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Wed May 23, 2007 1:53 am
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| The elfling is highly amusing....lol, you know, that is what Haldir really needs. He needs an elfling to keep him on his feet and busy. |
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Erufaelas
Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Reviews: 13
Location: New Lothlorien
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Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:51 pm
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Lovely chapter Nienna!
Haldir's predicament is still breaking my heart :..(
Rumil's torogtal brew is hysterical! Can't wait to see the results! |
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eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:47 am
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| LOL Absolutely hilarious. Poor Aragorn. He will never get any peace. |
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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:37 am
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Lovely chapter! RL interfered with reading this before now but I must say I enjoyed it very much! Particular favourites were: Haldir's and Arwen's interactions and the mention of Haldir's loyalty to Aragorn (beautiful in a grievous way) and the whole scene with Laurelin and her mother.
I definitely am disliking Rumil and co. more and more and hope they are found out soon. Haldir I dare say will be mightliy upset when he discovers their contemptous schemes!
Keep up the good work and please update soon! |
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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:01 am
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Good chapter! You've certainly managed to make me dislike Rumil even more so give yourself a pat on the back!
The potion won't work as Arwen loves Aragorn too much for something like that to interfere so I await to read what happens with interest!
Just one criticism: try not to use 'smirked' all the time, it gets repetitive. Otherwise carry on! |
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eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:28 pm
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"Does it take a long time to get there?" she asked.
LOL. I'm so glad to see you working on this again. I love your characterizations. The way you weave the stories together keeps my interest which is a compliment considering I am usually distracted by scene changes.
I especially love the Elfling.
I look forward to the next installment. |
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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
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Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:07 am
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| It is nice to see this updated. I really enjoyed reading the Aragorn bit and the flashback was a nice bit of backhistory. |
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