Reviews for "Snaga"

Tue Aug 05, 2003 3:45 pm

This is one of the most intriguing opening chapters I've read in a long time. I've very much been looking for a good fic that delves into the "other" side of things. Very creative and interesting. If anything struck me as odd, it was the black speech. I'm sure you've done a hoard of research to get it down just right, but having another language appear in a fic (and then to have it translated right there) is distracting. It also limits the dialog a little and shifts the focus away from the story.

I hope you'll continue this story soon... can't wait to meet the upper-up baddies. Smile smiley face

Sun Sep 21, 2003 2:07 am

Orcs! Yes! Me like orcs! more orcs! More! Laughing smiley face

khazar

Thu Oct 02, 2003 7:24 am

Great beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thu Jul 22, 2004 6:34 pm

I've had this story on my Watched list for a while now, and have checked back for updates. Sadly, I haven't seen any. Are you updating on another site? If your muse has gone on holiday, I hope she comes back soon.

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