Reviews for "Daeron's Lament"

Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:51 pm

Wow Haleth, you've managed to set that tone of dark grief in the first few words. That always amazes me when a writer can so deftly set a mood. I'm hoping that my inability to attain that is due to my immaturity as a writer as opposed to lack of talent, cuz when I grow up, I want to be able to write like you. Very Happy smiley face

I love Daeron now, never really put much thought into him before this moment.

Sat Mar 19, 2005 9:24 pm

I love it that he regrets telling Papa Elu, not because of all the tragic stuff that followed but because the forbidden-ness of Beren encouraged Luthien that way. lol. Clever, you.

Sun Mar 20, 2005 10:03 am

Now this is an interesting angle that I had never thought of--how Daeron would have felt, not about losing his love, but about his involvement in the loss of Luthien to her people. Very clever. I liked it.

Sun Mar 20, 2005 12:09 pm

Wonderful - and very evocative even for someone like me not familiar with the back story.

Wed Mar 23, 2005 4:04 pm

Haleth, this is beautiful! I remember how you were talking about writing this and I must say you have done a beautiful job. Bravo!

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