Reviews for "Comfort"

Wed Aug 06, 2003 10:08 am

Wow.

sheraiah is rendered speechless.

Wed Aug 06, 2003 3:12 pm

OMG.
You're my new muse. Both of you. It's so... *shivers* delicious.
If this was improved in any way, it would be ruined. it's perfect.
Wave smiley face

a what-it-should-be-like smut scene. In other words, a classic.

Fri Aug 08, 2003 11:19 pm

As much as I normally shy away from PWP? stories, this was very very yummy.
And I never say bad things about good sex.

I like the touch of it coming from both POV's - nice angle there

Mon Aug 11, 2003 9:57 pm

This certainly explains why Legolas is smiling when he leaves Lorien. Shocked smiley face

Oh, my. I am very impressed. And actually your scenario is pretty believable from a RL perspective.

Roisin

Sat Aug 16, 2003 7:40 pm

That was absolutely amazing! I really did like the switching between both points of view ... I think doing it that way gives you more insight on what's going on, not to mention getting both perspectives.

And as Roisin said, no wonder Legolas is so smily when he leaves Lorien. Wink smiley face

Maria

Mon Aug 25, 2003 9:15 am

Ooh very sexy. I enjoyed every bit of it.

Thu Sep 18, 2003 1:19 am

My my! Goodness! Gracious! Wonderfully done! This one has me fanning myself! Thank you. Definitely, um, Inspiring!

Fri Nov 07, 2003 6:18 pm

Hehehe - u gals are classic pervy wenches! Great story, well written too! Very Happy smiley face

I enjoyed the Legolas characterisation too - refreshing! Twisted Evil smiley face

Sun Feb 01, 2004 10:15 am

Well actually I spent the whole time wondering whether the comforter was a woman or an elf. Aha Lothlorien I read here in the reviews. Well I must have missed that part, focussed purely as I was on the smut. Very high quality. Very Happy smiley face

Excellent writing.

Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:55 pm

Well, I'm glad he's comfortable, 'cause I'm sure not! Need warning on this one, folks: Do not read at work. Shocked smiley face

At any rate, this was one of the finest smut biscuits I've read, and better still because it featured nekkidLeggy, which is always a happy thing. The POV experiment worked astonishingly well. I admit to some trepidation when I read about it in the AN at the beginning, but it was perfect for this sort of scene. Very clever decision, and very well executed. You both get cookies (lembas ones, even. with icing).

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