Reviews for "Lookout"

Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:25 pm

I really like this. It must have been difficult for the Elves to have any sort of fondness for mortals. It would have been very difficult to watch their friends and loved ones (or even a secret love) grow old and die while they continued on. Beautifully done.

Sun Mar 20, 2005 11:23 pm

I love this one. I happen to have a thing for longing type of tales, and this one's a pretty excellent effort. Short, sweet, and provokes reflection. Well done! Smile smiley face

Mon Mar 21, 2005 10:24 am

Lenale! Congratulations on posting your first fic; it had some very beautiful moments. I particularly liked "before she grew up to a be beauty with hardened red hands, entering his heart with greater force every time he saw her."

But, and I'm reluctant to admit this (*coughs*, shuffles feet ... ), I don't actually get it ... I gather it's about an Elf longing for a mortal, but who is the Prince of Rivendell? and I can't remember any mortals living close to the Golden Wood (I assume your depicting Lorien). I can't see where exactly this fits into Tolkien ... is it a Silm story I don't know?

So I am

NB, Confuzzled ...

Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:13 am

A very sweet moment, full of longing; a little canon hazy, but nicely worded. Thank you for sharing! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Feb 16, 2006 4:44 am

I find this nicely written, but I must confess to some confusion as to who it is. I like it, but I just would like some illumination. Thank you for sharing.

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "Lookout"