Reviews for "The Lost Meal"

Tue Mar 22, 2005 7:33 am

A very brotherly bit of advice and humor! Very nifty Smile smiley face

Thanks for sharing!

Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:14 am

Excellent - you've captured a lot in this vignette without making it seemed crammed at all. Good characterizations, too.

Tue Mar 22, 2005 3:19 pm

lol... well, that's one way of talking about food, for sure. Smile smiley face

This was a sweet moment between brothers; nice work. (hint: You probably want to change "wretched" in the first line to "retched." Smile smiley face

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[Oh, and this has nothing to do with the story, but your Simbelmyne icon is just lovely. Did you make it?]

Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:32 pm

Great job! Although it had its ewww moment, it was touching to see the two brothers together doing "brotherly" things.

Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:31 pm

Excellent idea, and a very realistic view of battle. Well done.

Tue Mar 29, 2005 7:55 pm

brotherly love.....of a sort!

well written, nicely interpreted, funny - all-around quite good!

Tue May 03, 2005 10:24 am

Awwww, pooooooor Faramir Crying or Very sad smiley face

Exactly the way I would react after a battle. Very good! Smile smiley face

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