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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:08 am
Yummy combination of two challenges. In only one hundred words I could see that tart inching to its end ... and I could just imagine the chain of events that got Merry and Estella in that ... situation. Hobbits and food ... it was bound to happen Very Happy smiley face !

What I liked the most was that usually when I think food and NC17, it's all about fruits and cream ... you surprised me with the image of the tart and these two going at it in the kitchen. Very original!
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:10 am
Hahaha! Oh my God... those horny little Mr. and Mrs. Brandybuck. Twisted Evil smiley face Gotta love them! Very Happy smiley face
(I couldn't help but feel sorry for the poor cake though...) Wink smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:16 am
Fabulous! Excellent combination of heat, sweet and savory! What a recipe ... you are a great cook.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Mar 22, 2005 3:52 pm
Fantastic! Brava! Love the phrase "impromptu marital feast." hee. And you've captured a moment of blissful domesticity just wonderfully. This is really really good.
 
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Saoirse

Joined: 17 Aug 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: In your closet
Tue Mar 22, 2005 5:49 pm
OoooO! How wickedly..emm delicious! hehe! Wonderful job, you've delineated Merry's not-so-subtle eagerness, and Estella's willful helplessness to her husband's lusts very... tastfully! : )
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:39 pm
I am not a PHF but that was hot stuff there SML! And funny too! Gotta love those happy, horny hobbits although I am surprised that a hobbit would resist the lure of food for anything. Good to know they do! Wink smiley face
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Tue Mar 22, 2005 7:22 pm
Will I ever be able to look at tarts again? - This was very 'inventive', you show a strong sense of imagination in your writing SML?
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Wed Mar 23, 2005 1:03 am
Laughing smiley face

hahaha.... SML, you did it again! Very Happy smiley face
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
Location: 
Mon Mar 28, 2005 4:20 am
I'll bet this is how the flat poptart got invented. It's gonna fall, it's falliiiiing. Yeah, let it fall baby! LOL Sil, this is greatness.
 
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
Tue Mar 29, 2005 7:48 pm
sil, this was hilarious.

trust you to mix sex, food, and hobbits together!
 
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