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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon Mar 28, 2005 3:29 pm

Oh, how nice it is to see a bit where Denethor is *good* with kids. Usually he's depicted as such a horrible father. This goes a far way toward redeeming him. Thank you.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Mon Mar 28, 2005 4:34 pm

NiftySmile smiley face Now that is how you lure a reluctant pupil! Very Happy smiley face Very nicely done!
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Mon Mar 28, 2005 5:15 pm

Really good work and I like the portrayal of Denethor here. AMazing how much you can get into 100 words.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:28 am

Strange to see Denethor portrayed as something more than a madman. I like to think that at one time he was kind and gentle. Very nicely written, and thank you for sharing.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:01 pm

Great little scene. Excellent depiction of the character's expressions and emotions. I love the way you wrote it.
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:08 pm

Somehow I expect that the dragon would grab Boromir more than Faramir--but maybe not. Denethor is wonderful here.
 
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