Reviews for "Natural love"

Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:36 am

The title says it all ... and the drabble delivers. Your word choices were so precise, so in tune with the natural harmony you were trying to concoct. A moment that we've all read a thousand times (or maybe only I read that much smut. Hmmm) suddenly became lush and green and living. Good use of imagery, even with the space limitations of drabbles. Hope you write more of these gems!

Tue Mar 29, 2005 2:41 pm

Wow, what a first story! Very Happy smiley face

I hope this will inspire you to write many more, you certainly know how to 'tell a tale' Very Happy smiley face

Tue Mar 29, 2005 6:41 pm

Okay - if this is your first story - you are now obligated to write more!! Bravo! Very good imagery and smut as well. Beautiful poetic smut I should say. Tis hard (no pun intended) to be beautiful and poetic at the same time as being smutty. And you did it all within 100 words!! Wave smiley face

Tue Mar 29, 2005 6:42 pm

Oh I enjoyed picturing my favorite elves in this scene. Well done, especially in 100 words. Hope you write more than just drabbles.

Tue Mar 29, 2005 7:45 pm

very nice, quite hot.

but who are the characters?

Fri Apr 01, 2005 9:05 am

Very nicely done! I must agree with the other reviewers, please write more!

Sat Apr 02, 2005 5:25 am

Wow, you sure started your foray into fanfic with a bang...er hum. Very nice, very erotic. Now tell the truth, it was me and Haldir, right? Me and Beleg? Me and _____Insert any elf name here? Lol Viv, only a thousand, cha. Rolling Eyes smiley face

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