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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:39 pm
Since we are seeing her thoughts, i think the cursing can be forgiven. Specially given the tone of the whole drabble is humorous. Darling, I laughed myself silly with that one.

Alive was very touching also. They are both precious, each with its own tone. holy crap!!!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sat Dec 17, 2005 7:41 am
Loved "Broken". Sounds like something I would write. LOL I agree about the swearing. Maybe something more attuned to the venacular of the times. (I really hate that word, but it is more that I would not think anyone would use it back then.)
Very well done. Thank you for sharing.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Oct 17, 2006 6:13 am
Glad to see this featured. (Still do not like that word!)

Thank you for sharing.
 
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