Reviews for "Rides a Pale Horse"

Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:34 am

What a sad ending - but tempered by the babe and the idea of Amaryn living on through their son. The story worked well and you drew out the relationships well. Look forward to reading your next one.

Fri Apr 22, 2005 12:42 am

Despite the well known theme of "saving Haldir" (As some readers have already pointed) it was very touching and moving. And this ending was so bittersweet... I completely understand Amaryn's feelings towards her scar, because I have been through a similar situation myself. I am a classical ballet dancer and got an ugly, red, swollen scar years ago on my chest. I had a hard time trying to go back to dancing with this terrible thing showing off to anyone to see. And there is the pain also, every time that it is too cold, or too hot. Until today I find difficult to forget that it is here, to go to the beach, or to wear clothes with low cuts, but at least I didn't give up on dancing because of it. Very good story! I would like to read more of your work.

Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:22 am

I'm still patiently waiting for the next chapter.
This story is number one on my update list.
Take Care,
twilla. Smile smiley face

Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:15 am

Emmess, I loved your story! It was so very beautiful.

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