Reviews for "For You, Fair Light"

Mon Apr 04, 2005 6:03 pm

Lovely cadence. Wish there was more, yet just a drabble. Well done. A delight to read.

Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:48 pm

Lovely! So nice and in poetic form no less! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Apr 05, 2005 7:53 am

Very well done. I liked the way you played with their names with the Fair light and stalwart hope. And I love things that explore the power of the Ring. Great challenge entry.

Wed Apr 06, 2005 6:49 am

This was lovely . . 'stay this tempted hand'.

Very poetic and talented writing, well done Smile smiley face

Wed Apr 06, 2005 2:50 pm

It was beautiful. Poetry is so hard to write and read. It either grabs someone or they stop reading. If the style is wrong, the subject doesn't even matter. This one grabbed me from the start. It is a beautiful style but it was your portrayal of Aragorn being tempted that was so touching. I can still remember that moment in the movie and how you wanted to melt when he turned down the ring. You captured the true hero in him. Too often people remember more what Arwen gave up for him rather than what he did for her. You touched on that nicely. Poetry, Viv? Is there anything you don't do??

Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:08 pm

Just beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Your use of words and the lyrical flow of things while telling a wonderful tale is just very enchanting.

Kendra

Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:47 am

Oh Vivveh, I'm so thrilled with this beautiful poem, for more reasons than one, hehe. I always kinda saw Aragorn as a version of Faramir (wouldn't pick it up off the road, Faramir, not movie) on crack, never doubting and no desire for the ring. How sad and yet how much more profound to think that he too fought temptation and yet accomplished all that he did for the love of Arwen. Wow, what a man.

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