Reviews for "Running"

Wed Apr 06, 2005 9:44 am

This is a nice little tale, - Bergil the boy/man, hero of the day!

Nice work Nancy Smile smiley face

Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:27 am

Wow Nancy! What a great jump of capturing the urgency and and determination in a drabble. Excellent job!

Thu Apr 07, 2005 7:16 am

Really tense! Great job!

Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:57 am

Wonderful! The urgency, pride and determination is all there, and the bewilderment too, of too much happening too soon...! Love it! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:23 pm

You allow us to see a child's side of an adult in a very lovely way Smile smiley face

Thank you for sharing it.

Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:48 pm

Great expression! In so few words you were able to convey the urgency, fear, pride, and the overwhelming of all emotions wonderfully.

Kendra

Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:45 am

Awwww... so sweet and touching! You really make one feel for Bergil in this lovely drabble *huggles Bergil* Smile smiley face

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