Reviews for "The White Lady of Rohan"

Mon Jul 18, 2005 2:58 pm

I am very confused. This looks like a great start to a story, but it would be really helpful to know a little bit more about what is going on. (Why Faramir and Eowyn are out in the middle of nowhere, where exactly they are and why Gandalf would lend Shadowfax to them, or for that matter, why Shadowfax would let himself be lent, a little more info on what this unnamed evil might be, where exactly Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli are, etc.) There is a lot of dialogue and a lot of action, but not much description otherwise. The story could use some fleshing out, and probably a good beta (check the forums), as well as a little slowing down. It seems to run very quickly. On the other hand, it's very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

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