I really enjoyed reading this You have a nice way of writing, hope to see more of it!
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Apr 11, 2005 4:30 pm
Very fine. I particularly like that you have imagined such a rich back story: the involvement of E&E in Arathorn's death, their having fostered others before, the attack on the Dunedain settlement. Powerful.
ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:47 pm
Oh I really like this. Elrond's interactions with everyone were especially perfect but I liked how you portrayed all the characters. And there are alot of details in here that are very nicely done. And the writing style is very fluid and appropriate for the characters. I will definitely be watching this. Great job.
picara
Joined: 08 Aug 2004 Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Tue Apr 12, 2005 11:24 am
Like the portrayal of the character's here and the dialogue. Good job.