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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Wed Apr 13, 2005 2:16 pm
I like it Luthien. I would never guess that you wrote it quickly. I thought it flowed nicely and the rhyme was well done. I am just loving the poetry that's been around recently.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:13 pm
Seemingly childish rhyme associated with the villain... Very interesting and provocative, especially when I called Sauron's song battle with Felagund to my mind.
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:25 pm
and it kinda feels creepy sometimes.

Morgoth is supposed to be creepy Luthien, and this was a cool way to convey that. I thought it was charming in parts, evil in others, very original idea. Nice job.
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:26 pm
It is creepy but I like it! Perfect for a bad guy drabble. You don't get much badder than old Morgoth! Evil or Very Mad smiley face
 
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