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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 9:31 am
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Very romantic, your style of writing was very real and atmospheric - "a century was no more than an hour".
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 10:44 am
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Beautiful. I love the contrast of Elrond's first expectations upon his arrival as opposed to what actually happened. The relative nature of time is expressed wonderfully, and it's only fitting that Elrond finally finds respite in the same lands his wife has found healing.
It always amazes me how 100 words can be so touching and let the imagination wonder. Thanks for sharing. |
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 11:37 am
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Awwwww... that was just so beautiful. I normally don't read elf stories much, but I've always had kind of a soft spot for Elrond and Celebrían. So I just had to read this one... Lovely! Thanks!  |
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 2:29 pm
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very mushy and romantic.... makes me want to find my boyfriend and hug him
Never really pictured Elrond as the romantic type, he always seems so stern, but I think I like him this way. |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 2:58 pm
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| Wonderful - very incisive to use the timelessness of Eressea to express the timelessness of their love. Very expressive. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 3:14 pm
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Beautiful and very romantic. Thank you for sharing  |
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Cuthalion

Joined: 10 Jul 2004 Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 5:58 pm
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| Very beautiful and atmospheric. Well done! |
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Wed Apr 20, 2005 5:03 am
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Spaceums, thank you honey, this is just loverly. Beats the heck out of Saruman and Grima on the sentimentality front. You're still my hero, dear.
Jesxxxx |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sat Apr 23, 2005 9:23 am
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| Outstanding! So 'elfy.' I think you captured this moment perfectly and it is especially impressive to do so in 100 words. |
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ArtanisOrangeBlossom
Joined: 07 Nov 2004 Reviews: 96
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Mon May 02, 2005 5:19 pm
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| I do agree that everything is very 'elfy' (as Ellisk put it) but there is that lingering stand of mortality that seems to always follow Elrond around and that you always portray in such a wonderful manner. Great job love-y |
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