Reviews for "Of Fathers and Sons"

Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:23 pm

I liked this. Very Happy smiley face

Very well written and great topic!

Sun Apr 24, 2005 2:01 pm

I really liked your perspective here; particularly about the palantir.

However (and some probably say the same of me), your frequent use and over-formal order of adjectives and modifiers I thought a little forced.

Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:14 pm

Very nicely done. I liked it quite a bit. Thank you for sharing.

Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:38 pm

Ugh, what a way to get your feet wet Kendra, very nicely done. Very painful imagery but appropriate. Just picturing him at the last unable to relinquish the object of his torment. Man, that's sad.

Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:03 pm

Very nicely done. It shows the contrast suffered in many families. I did have a problem with one line: "The youngest, a failure within his father’s eyes." I really think that 'within' should have been just 'in'. It just reads odd to me. Otherwise, very good. I liked it alot.

Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:29 am

Read again. Still swayed by how poignant this is. Nice to see it in the featured box.

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