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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun Apr 24, 2005 4:36 pm

Poor, poor Denethor! I always felt so sorry for the poor guy... why didn't he understand that Faramir was NOT dead?!
Very well done! Smile smiley face
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sun Apr 24, 2005 5:08 pm

I like the idea of Denethor's motivation for trying to burn himself being that he wanted to follow his son. Denethor is definitely a tragic character. Good job.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:21 am

Well done Triss Very Happy smiley face
 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:55 am

You captured Denethor's suffering very well. Good job.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Apr 25, 2005 10:00 am

You've had an interesting thought, here, Triss; I can easily imagine through your words the surprise and regret a father might feel in this situation. You make me wonder, though (and this is a good thing) if Denethor had lost his hope in Gondor and victory through his posession through the Palantir, what roll he thought his sons would play in the end and if they would out live him? Hmmm smiley face
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:10 pm

So sad. Like you said, no one should see their children die. Crying or Very sad smiley face
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:02 pm

I'm with Nancy in that this made me think, although of a different question. I wonder how much clarity of thought he was allowed at the very last, and if he were allowed to see the reality of what he'd done, would he have felt relieved to know that Faramir would live or more despair thinking that he'd only survived to die or suffer a terrible fate at the hands of Sauron. Hmm, what a tragic, haunting last thought you have given him here. But when looked at from the perspective that the alternative could have been worse, that he could have died ultimately not knowing the fate of his younger son, it just makes the thought that he was finally doing the right thing by Faramir, even more beautiful. Just brought tears to my eyes.
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Thu May 19, 2005 11:55 pm

I've always thought that he realized, when it was pretty much too late, what he'd done. This drabble captures that.
 
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005
Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
Wed Jun 08, 2005 4:22 pm

Sad! And he's not just a cracked guy but a man with real feelings.. Very good!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:01 am

It is nice to think that he may have seen things differently. In all honesty, I did not finish ROTK, so I only have movieverse to go on, but since I do not like a lot of the changes in character and such that I have read, I have to think that PJ mangles poor Denethor, also. So, I will live with the illusions given me by other writers.

You have done an outstanding job of giving the man some humanity. Thank you for sharing.
 

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Last edited by Rous on Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:47 am
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