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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Sat May 28, 2005 11:10 pm
I really enjoyed this story and I thought you captured the emotions between the two men very well. It had to be very difficult for Faramir to relate to Aragorn. It is something that I have been trying to capture in my own story! Smile smiley face Well done!
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:13 pm
I, too, enjoyed this story greatly. I have always felt for poor Faramir and his troubled family relations. I also love the depths of emotion available in Elessar. I would encourage you, though, to try to use shorter sentences if possible. Some tended to run on and became difficult to read.
 
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